wolf
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darkpaw
Feb 6, 2007 16:25:28 GMT -5
Post by wolf on Feb 6, 2007 16:25:28 GMT -5
1. Name: Darkpaw 2. Gender: she-cat 3. Age: 17 moons 4. Clan: unknown so far 5. Rank: " " 6. Apprentice 7. Appearance: (without the red eye) 9. History: you so don't wanna know 10. Other: she's very changeing in her mood 11. PRACTICE POST: As Dark paw walked down the streem's edge she smiled slighlty and listened to it. "It's quiet" she said and yawned slightly. She sat down and admired the sounds and the sights that were around her with her stunning eyes. "hm... mabey a bit to quiet" she said and chuckled slightly as she watched the fish in the streem swim by in fear of being caught. "Don't worry, I'm not hungry" she said to them and laughed slightly
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Post by Thorneh on Feb 8, 2007 6:41:43 GMT -5
((You're going to have to do a couple of things first before this is accepted.... First, I need for you to use better spelling and capitalization... Second, there needs to be a short written description of your character, as well, please. =) Third, I need for the practice post and history to be longer and you to take into consideration the first thing I mentioned when writing it. And finally, I need for you to select a Clan. A cat can't be an apprentice in no Clan...so I need for you to pick one.
Once you do all of that, it should be fine. ^^
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